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You have the makings of an interesting character in Lynn. I can see why you'd want her to be shy and seductive at the same time. But what makes you think she's a nymphomaniac? How does that fit with her submissive personality? And would she really pose like a superhero in a bar? You've got a lot of details there, but maybe try to streamline them into something more cohesive. The rest of it looks good though! Lynn is definitely a striking character.